Thursday, November 19, 2020

Fiction Story 1

 Finn and the giant monster

By Reeve


The horrified astronaut Finnegan, could hear screeching noises outside the ship. He was too afraid to leave his ship but the other astronauts said to him, “you have to leave the ship and research for us”. 

Finnegan said, “ohh, OK but one of you is coming out with me.” 

“OK,'' said one of the other astronauts. Finn and the other astronaut could scarcely believe that he was face to face with an extraterrestrial being. The horror of the Martian’s appearance had shaken him to the core; he and his friend stood in shock, incapable of movement. 

They saw the planet and were amazed. It had water, weird living creatures and a huge cave that said, “DO NOT ENTER A HUGE MOUNTAIN”. 

Then Finn and his friend said we can research that. When Finn walked in he saw this huge lump so he climbed up it and stabbed a huge stick into it to mark that he had been there. But then it started shaking and wobbling!
Finn said to his friend, “I don’t think this is a mountain, I think it’s a monster RUN!!!”

 As Finn and his friend got out they were eaten.
The End.

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